Comments for First Stop Fiction

Comment on Asylum by Colleen Fullin by 12

12 — Sat, 16 Mar 2013 18:29:03 +0000

This story hit hard, in all the right places. I loved it. Its one of my favourites at First Stop.

Comment on Strangers and Blueberry Muffins by Kip Hanson by Lynn T. Olsen

Lynn T. Olsen — Wed, 06 Feb 2013 17:43:50 +0000

For a short while, he had the soaked sidewalk to himself — until the Joker and Spider-Man showed up.

Comment on Your Basement Misses You by Amanda Himmelmann by Secret

Secret — Sat, 02 Feb 2013 00:20:58 +0000

Some places hold ghostly memories. I loved this.

Comment on Strangers and Blueberry Muffins by Kip Hanson by Justis

Justis — Thu, 17 Jan 2013 23:50:42 +0000

That our stories cut off at the first opportunity is the idea! Though, of course, I can’t speak for the author.

Comment on Strangers and Blueberry Muffins by Kip Hanson by Tryngvald

Tryngvald — Mon, 14 Jan 2013 20:27:42 +0000

Where’s the rest of the story?

Comment on Petra by Matthew Garcia by Sabby

Sabby — Fri, 04 Jan 2013 04:42:55 +0000

Intense imagery and descriptive inner detail.
I love your darkness and writing is magnetic.

Comment on The Eulogy by Marian Brooks by Barry Basden

Barry Basden — Wed, 28 Nov 2012 21:41:46 +0000

Nailed it.

Comment on Listen to the Evil Twin by Samantha Memi by Justis

Justis — Fri, 24 Aug 2012 00:48:39 +0000

Thank you for bringing this to my attention. I think it’s resolved.

Comment on Listen to the Evil Twin by Samantha Memi by Eliza Archer

Eliza Archer — Fri, 24 Aug 2012 00:08:27 +0000

Samantha’s Memi’s story is delightful, but the formatting is wrong. Is there something that could be done to fix it? I really enjoyed “Listen to the Evil Twin,” but the formatting is distracting.

Comment on Constant Threat of Downpour by James Valvis by PANK Blog / Suggested Readings

PANK Blog / Suggested Readings — Wed, 15 Aug 2012 17:32:48 +0000

[...] Review, Sal Pane and J. Bradley. JP Dancing Bear has a poem in A Minor. First Stop Fiction features James Valvis. At Everyday Genius, Shane Jones who also has a book out this week, Daniel Fights a [...]